Monday 10 October 2016

              


                     The scary story


Far far far far away in a planet found not long ago it was called dieth planit there was zombie creepers and ghost there was a mansion a haunted it was called youtuber mansion!!! people went in and did not come out but one girl got out her name was molly she had a friend cooled dolly she disappeared... now the story will begin.




“mum I'm  going to dolly’s” said molly. “Ok bye” said mum. “Hi dolly” said molly. “Hi molly” said dolly. “ I got an idea” said molly. “What type of idea” said dolly.    “ an adventure” Said molly. “What type of adventure” said dolly. “To death planet” said molly. “ what the what” said dolly. “Ok then do not come”said molly. Ok do not get hurt” said dolly. “Ok don't worry” said molly. “Molly i do not want you to leave” said dolly. “But” said molly “now don't leave” said
dolly. “No i'm going and that's it”said molly. “Ok”     said dolly. “By” said molly. 1 year later “finally i made it yes wow the youtuber manchin i went in i see why people do not come out it's so
































big omg it is the 1 the only dantdm omg”said molly. “Hi my name is dan how can i help you”said dan. “I'm you're number 1 fan omg i love your channel” said molly.”ummmm thanks” said dan
“No problem”said molly . “Is that joeygraceffa!!!”said molly. “Yes it is me but you have to get out of her” said joeygraceffa. “why “ said molly. “Wall there are monsters in her you need to go now” said joeygraceffa. “But i want to stay” said molly. “Fine 2  hours then you leave and if you get hurt                   it is not my fault” said  joeygraceffa. “Ok this is going to be cool” said molly. “Ok so i will give you a tour” said joeygraceffa. “Is there any other youtubers” said molly. “Yes there is stampy and little kelly and little carly and
lizza and daily bumps” said joeygraceffa. “Wow that is a lot of youtubers” said molly. “Ok let us get on with our tour” said joeygraceffa.
“Ok let us go on the tour now” said molly. “Hi” said missy. “ mi mi missy :o" said molly. “OH no here comes the zombies” said missy. “Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr” said the zombies. “We have to run” said ollie. “Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa” said fine
“Missy can you get fine pless” said birin. “Run run run run” said  ollie. “Woof!!! woof!!!!” said carma. “Muow” said zery. “Come on let's go” Said missy.  “Ok but let me get my cat” said ollie. “No she will folow us” said abn. “Ok” said molly. “Ahhhh i think it bit me” said missy. “Come with me.said brian. “Ok” said Molly. “Come on let's go” said Brian. “I have to go” said Molly. “Ok bey” said ollie. “Bey” said Molly. 1 year later. “Uhhhh this is taking so so long to get to earth” said Molly. “I'm finally here” said Molly “hi” said mum. “Hi I mist you” said Molly. “There's something I need to tell you” said mum. “What” said Molly. “Your friend she is gone” said mum….



To be continued………….  

2 comments:

  1. That is a very big story Grace. You have a very vivid imagination and I am enjoying how you are able to write conversations into your storyline. Before you add any more to it, can we have a listen to it together so that we can find where each sentence ends. This is where your read/write or text to speech app can help you too. One important hint....each new speaker has there own sentence and their own new line.
    That mansion looks pretty impressive!!!

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  2. Thank you miss cribb it took me such a long time to make🙂

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