Wednesday 23 March 2016

This is my story so far what do you think

YAY!!!!!! School I'm so so so so happy camp is to day bey mum rein rein rein there goes the ball 😋 time to go to the mat now
time to go YAY!!!! I'm going with kalissa and ahi, 20 minutes later we are here yay lats see what is on my list first I have flying Kiwi we 


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  1. Anonymous31 March 2016 at 13:52

    I like your story so far grace.i like that you used show not tell

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  2. Anonymous31 March 2016 at 13:52

    I like your story so far grace.i like that you used show not tell

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  3. Anonymous31 March 2016 at 13:53

    i love the start it really caches my mind into reading this

    :D

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  4. Anonymous31 March 2016 at 13:54

    i like how you are using show not tell.
    get up the good work grace.

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  5. Anonymous31 March 2016 at 13:57

    i love the start it really caches my mind into reading this

    :D

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